Rough cut of trailer

This is the rough cut version of our trailer we have just about got everything into the order we wanted from the actual script. This is not edited tightly so do not expect it to be perfect in terms of sound. From this we will get feedback and then this will allow us to ensure that finished product will meet the needs of the audience.

Teacher feedback that we had received is that this 'trailer needs to be a bit more specific in showing the two sides of Kareem', the rough cut scenes do not really show the difference between the two lives that he is living. 'Kareem will need to be shown more doing the bad things than the good'. The trailer will need to be more clear in terms of portraying the characters shown in the trailer so that it leaves an impact and interests the audience.
 We have managed to gain video feedback from some of the our target audience and they have suggested some ideas which we can take on board for the final tightened editing of our trailer.